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DWolfman
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Prowlin' n Howlin'
Strangers
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March 26, 2009, 04:23:44 PM »
Of kind words unspoken to unhearing ear
And love yet unbidden, imprisoned by fear
A glance quickly hidden, a smile yet unknown
To pass by forgotten...forsaken...alone
-DW-
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jpatrick
Co-Founder of The Write Crowd
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Posts: 21
Re: Strangers
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March 28, 2009, 07:30:42 PM »
Very nice, DWolfman. Its simplicity belies a greater depth. I always like it when more is said than the number of lines would suggest. Very, very good. Please feel free to share some more!
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J. Patrick Lemarr
Husband, Father, Author, Poet
DWolfman
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Posts: 2
Prowlin' n Howlin'
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April 02, 2009, 03:48:59 PM »
Thanks!
Looking forward to reading the work posted here.
-DW-
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jpatrick
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April 03, 2009, 03:16:29 AM »
Most of my work goes to my blog, but I think I'll start posting it here as well.
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J. Patrick Lemarr
Husband, Father, Author, Poet
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